From Beast Boy to Terra

[storiesthatnever]

Let me know what you think!



Her statue lay in a darkened place.

An angel girl with a frozen face.

Her name was written on a plated rock,

An 'unforgiven' that the world forgot.

He sat next to her stoned figure and stared,

With no feelings at all, no thoughts prepared.

Deperation of hope too late to be found.

Memories played like a film without sound.

Alive in his heart, the boy only knew:

This couldn't be the end, but the start of a challenge new.

Her eyes pleaded freedom, and he would obey.

Do what he must, whatever it would take.

Friends forever,

Always together.

Through sunshine, sleet, hail, and rain,

He would save her from the casted spell of pain.



Kinda short, I know.

[michealdark]

You stole most of that from "Concrete Angel". In general,good poem. If only I haven't heard such a large percentage of it from another source...

[storiesthatnever]

What?

The first four lines I had seen before, but I changed them, and added on. The rest is my own.

[michealdark]

The first 4 lines are from the Martina Mcbride song "Concrete Angel". Here's the lyrics:

Martina McBride - Concrete Angel Lyrics

She walks to school with the lunch she packed
Nobody knows what she's holdin' back
Wearin' the same dress she wore yesterday
She hides the bruises with linen and lace

The teacher wonders but she doesn't ask
It's hard to see the pain behind the mask
Bearing the burden of a secret storm
Sometimes she wishes she was never born

Through the wind and the rain
She stands hard as a stone
In a world that she can't rise above
But her dreams give her wings
And she flies to a place where she's loved
Concrete angel

Somebody cries in the middle of the night
The neighbors hear, but they turn out the lights
A fragile soul caught in the hands of fate
When morning comes it'll be too late

[Repeat Chorus]

A statue stands in a shaded place
An angel girl with an upturned face
A name is written on a polished rock
A broken heart that the world forgot

[Repeat Chorus]

[storiesthatnever]

Ooh, I have to hear that song. It sounds really nice.

[michealdark]

It'll make you weep like a baby!

[storiesthatnever]

Is that a bad thing???

[michealdark]

No,that's a great thing in this case. This is like "Evanescence 'My Immortal'" kind of weeping over a song,not "ARGH,SIMPLE PLAN! MUST KILL MYSELF NOOOOOOOWWWWWWW" kind of weeping

[storiesthatnever]

Ah.... I understand.