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Post by superdavefumc on Oct 9, 2005 13:11:15 GMT -5
okay, just starting a thread for my fic. if you need a summary, it's in the thread "need a title". please don't be too harsh, as, like i said in need a title, this IS my first fic. here goes nothing...
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Post by superdavefumc on Oct 9, 2005 13:25:05 GMT -5
She offered him a sad smile as her powers pushed his lone pillar away. He reached out for her, but knew it was in vain as the familiar glow entered her eyes and surrounded her hands. She reluctantly began work on her own grave as a tear slid down his face. A gout of steam shot up from the ground, and as he shielded his eyes- Raven sat up with a start. 'What the crap was that?!?', she questioned herself. 'Why would I be feeling such strong emotions at this time of night? And why sadness? The empath tried to puzzle out the situation, but eventually admitted defeat and returned to the realm of sleep.
The next morning, the resident changeling looked horrible. Starfire was the first to pick up the change in her normally cheery friend's demeanor.
"Friend Beast Boy, why is it that you appear as if you were trampled by a herd of Lokthor beasts?"
"Didn't sleep well. I'd rather not talk about it, Star," the distressed teen replied.
Robin picked up on the pain and weariness in his friend's voice and confronted him about it.
"What's up, Beast Boy?"
"I said I didn't wanna talk about it!" With that, the emerald elf stormed out in the direction of the stairs.
Raven, feeling pulled by her friend's feelings, considered following him, and prepared to voice her concerns. Her mechanical teammate, however, beat her to the punch.
"Yo! You guys think we should check on BB?" inquired Cyborg.
"No, let's let him figure it out for himself," replied the leader of the titans. Raven disregarded these orders and headed for the roof. What she found there would change the lives of the titans forever.
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okay, that's part one. i'll put up the next part if you guys like it. if not, i'll completely retool the story based on your suggestions. i await your contribution.
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Post by robin on Oct 9, 2005 13:54:40 GMT -5
Not a bad start at all. ;D
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Post by starfire on Oct 9, 2005 16:16:20 GMT -5
I concur. Terrific start, can't wait to read more ^_^
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Post by superdavefumc on Oct 9, 2005 20:35:23 GMT -5
thanks for the praise, guys. seriously, if you feel that i should change something, just say so. i'm open to suggestions.
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Post by naomi on Oct 10, 2005 1:14:27 GMT -5
Love it! MORE MORE MORE! ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D  |
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Post by superdavefumc on Oct 10, 2005 17:39:47 GMT -5
hehe... maybe later tonight, my friends.
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Post by superdavefumc on Oct 13, 2005 11:57:49 GMT -5
Raven opened the door to the roof and looked out. Beast Boy sat on the edge of the T, looking down into the ocean. Sighing, Raven headed towards her friend and sat down next to him.
"Feel like talking to me about it?"
"Raven! I didn't notice you come out. Well, I guess I could tell you, but only if you promise not to tell the others."
"Very well..."
"Well, the thing is, I've been having these dreams about... well, I've just been having bad dreams about my past and my future. They've been a little scary, but mostly just sad."
'So it was Beast Boy I sensed last night.'
"I dunno, Rae. I just... I just don't know what to do."
Raven suprised herself and Beast Boy when she reached over and hugged him.
"Don't worry, Beast Boy, I'll help you..."
A new voice butted into their conversation. "Well, isn't THIS so sweet and lovey-dovey!"
The two Titans turned to see the shadows made by the roof access door begin to change. A shape began to form. Beast Boy gasped, and Raven let out a small 'eep'. Both of them ran downstairs, back to the common room, to where the other Titans were.
Robin, noticing his friends out of breath, voiced his concerns. "What's going on, you two?"
"Something... on the roof... came out of shadows...", gasped an out-of-breath Beast Boy.
"What? Someone was hiding in the shadows?"
The same chilling voice that had come on the roof echoed through the room.
"No, dear boy. I was the shadow."
The Titans turned to see a black mist descend to the floor, where it took human shape. There stood a pale young man, appearing about 17 in age, wearing a wide brimmed hat, gloves, a gentleman's suit, goggles, a hoodless cloak, and boots, all maroon in color. Around his waist was a belt holding a scabbard for a rapier and a holster from a semiautomatic pistol. His silver, shoulder length hair was tied back, with a few bangs hanging forward. His grin showed off a pair of long, sharp fangs.
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Post by superdavefumc on Oct 13, 2005 21:20:12 GMT -5
I UPDATED!!!
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Post by robin on Oct 13, 2005 21:31:56 GMT -5
There stood a pale young man, appearing about 17 in age, wearing a wide brimmed hat, gloves, a gentleman's suit, goggles, a hoodless cloak, and boots, all maroon in color. Around his waist was a belt holding a scabbard for a rapier and a holster from a semiautomatic pistol. His silver, shoulder length hair was tied back, with a few bangs hanging forward. His grin showed off a pair of long, sharp fangs. Vincent from Final Fantasy 7 !!!!!!!!! j/k It's going along great |
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Post by superdavefumc on Oct 17, 2005 22:46:35 GMT -5
Bring
Up
My
Post.
YOU GUYS! i posted part two, and only robin responds? c'mon!
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Post by naomi on Oct 17, 2005 22:52:19 GMT -5
I'm sorry! YAY LOVE IT. i wish I could add more.....
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Post by elle on Aug 9, 2006 20:19:20 GMT -5
oooo..... mysterious, what happens next? *sits on edge of seat*
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