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Post by wishiwasbeastgirl on Sept 4, 2005 17:38:23 GMT -5
BeastBoy walked down the hall, just getting out of the living room from his latest attempt at getting her to laugh. Raven. She didn't laugh, but he tried. Oh man did he try. He sighed as he slammed his back against the wall. "I'm such an idiot. Why do I try to get her to laugh? Why don't I just tell her?" Because she'll say she doesn't love you, he thought. He loved Raven. Not a little love. A huge love. A love for something he knew was in her room, reading or saying those words he knew so well.
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Post by wishiwasbeastgirl on Sept 4, 2005 17:39:17 GMT -5
that was only part of it.
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Post by wishiwasbeastgirl on Sept 5, 2005 7:43:23 GMT -5
Raven sighed, and floated down from the air, standing up from medidtating. She had meditated because of BeastBoy. He's not even funny, she thought. Yeah, but he does try. So? It doesn't mean he's funny. But every day he tries to get you to laugh, Romance says. I think it's sweet. Well, it's annoying! Raven shakes her head and walks over to the door. She hears BeastBoy. "I'm such an idiot! Why do I try to get her to laugh?" Raven steps away. "Why?" she asks."You're the only one here that tries to make me laugh, make me smile. I know I don't, but I want to." she whispers."Why is it so hard to tell you?" Down, out of Raves room, and by the T-car, Cyborg was washing his baby. He throws the wet towel on the floor and looks at his clean car. "Well, that looks good." he says, nodding at his good work."I just wish I had someone to help me a little. Where is the little grass stain when you need him?" Or maybe you want someone else help, he thinks. What? What about BumbleBee?"Okay, why am I talking to myself in my head?" Cyborg asks, blushing. You want BumbleBee! No, she's my friend. You want her to be something more! Right then, BumbleBee had to come flying in the door with the rest of the Titans East. Cyborg shouts. "Hey Sparky! Nice car." Cyborg smiled. "Hey Bee, thanks." "Senior Cyborg!" Mas and Menos cried. "Hey, guys, let's go and watch Robin in the gym." Speedy says."I want to see if he could even beat me!" Everyone runs out the door, leaving BumbleBee, who didn't care, and Cyborg, who wanted to stay with BumbleBee. Cyborg looks at her. You want her to be more then friends, he thinks. Up in the gym, Robin is kicking a punching bag. He's thikning about Slade, which is making him beat the punching bag harder. "Senior Robin!" Mas and Menos cry. Robin turns around, almost punching them. He sighs. "Hey Robin." Speedy says, walking up to him and pushing Mas and Menos back. "Speedy!" Robin says happily."Hey Aqualad." Aqualad smiles. "Friends of the Titans East!" Starfire cries, flying into the room."It is glorious to see you!" Everyone smiles at Starfire, but Robin can't get his face to move. She's too beautiful I think I had a face cramp trying to smile like I wanted to, Robin thinks. Speedy sees Robin and laughs. He raises an eyebrow at him and turns to the Titans East. "Come on, let's go to the living room and leave these lovers alone." Speedy says. Aqualad and Mas and Menos follow Speedy out. Robin glares at the door as it closes. "Robin, what does Speedy mean by calling us the lovers?" asks Starfire, walking over to Robin. Robin blushes. It's the way I feel about you, he thinks. Why is it so hard to tell her?
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Post by wishiwasbeastgirl on Sept 5, 2005 7:44:50 GMT -5
Yeah, that's what I have. Sorry if it's bad, which I know it is. Tell me what you think of it.
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Post by the Azure Sky on Sept 5, 2005 22:00:30 GMT -5
sweet only thing is gammer other than that its awesome
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Post by bogbrush on Sept 6, 2005 9:59:25 GMT -5
O......K that really made sense
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Post by wishiwasbeastgirl on Sept 9, 2005 15:55:53 GMT -5
What? It didn't make sense?
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Post by superdavefumc on Oct 13, 2005 21:34:16 GMT -5
it made sense, but you may want to do a little more to distinguish thoughts...
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Post by wishiwasbeastgirl on Oct 18, 2005 14:54:49 GMT -5
Yeah, well this is a dead post now.
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Post by moonchild10 on Oct 22, 2005 9:23:48 GMT -5
I really liked it! I especially liked the last paragraph, that was a very Starfire-ish line. ^_^ You did very nice keeping the characters true to themselves. Are you going to write more?
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Post by wishiwasbeastgirl on Oct 22, 2005 11:39:06 GMT -5
One shot. But I could. Can you say writer totally and unrealistically pushing the relationships? No, I'm kidding.
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